Re: [Request] Review User Guide 'Welcome'

Sean Wheller wrote:

> On Friday 21 January 2005 02:18, Nick Loeve wrote:
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> > Did a quick review here at work (i'll have another detailed spellcheck
> > etc later).
> > Here is a patch for a few things i found.
> >
> > Well done. Nice Intro to Ubuntu.
> >
> > One thing i thought of, is that there is quite a few almost 'geek' terms
> > like dependancies , X ect, which most people will not understand. I
> > suppose you have to get detailed at some point :)
> >    
> OK the patch looks good. Just apply it.
>
> Thanks :-)
>  
Done :)