Author: trappist
Date: Tue Sep 12 20:02:44 2006
New Revision: 3282
Modified:
trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/C/adeptguide.xml
trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/addremoveprograms/C/addremoveprograms.xml
trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/adeptupdater/C/adeptupdater.xml
Log:
Adeptguide tweaks
Modified: trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/C/adeptguide.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/C/adeptguide.xml (original)
+++ trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/C/adeptguide.xml Tue Sep 12 20:02:44 2006
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- <emphasis>Redo</emphasis>: Redo the last
'un-done'
+ <emphasis>Redo</emphasis>: Redo the last
'undone'
action.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
Modified: trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/addremoveprograms/C/addremoveprograms.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/addremoveprograms/C/addremoveprograms.xml
(original)
+++ trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/addremoveprograms/C/addremoveprograms.xml Tue Sep
12 20:02:44 2006
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@
<sect1 id="introduction" status="draft">
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>
- The &apps; is an easy to use application to install
packages on Debian based system for the K Destop Enviroment (KDE). Modeled
along the lines of <application>Gnome Application Installer</application>,
another graphical installer based on Gnome. &appsshort; provides an
easy-to-use and familiar interface with which users can perform software
management operations.
+ The &apps; is an easy-to-use application to install
packages on a Debian-based system for the K Destop Enviroment (KDE). Modeled
along the lines of <application>Gnome Application Installer</application>, a
graphical installer based on Gnome. &appsshort; provides an easy-to-use and
familiar interface with which users can perform software management operations.
</para>
<para>
- &appsshort; can be started from the K menu or from the
command line. In order to start &appsshort; you will be required to provide
the root password.
+ &appsshort; can be started from the K menu or from the
command line. In order to start &appsshort; you will be required to provide
your password.
</para>
<para> To start &apps; from the menu system select
<menuchoice>
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
-
<emphasis>What's This?</emphasis>: Provides context specific help.
+
<emphasis>What's This?</emphasis>: Provides context-specific help.
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -266,4 +266,4 @@
</para>
</sect2>
</sect1>
-</article>
\ No newline at end of file
+</article>
Modified: trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/adeptupdater/C/adeptupdater.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/adeptupdater/C/adeptupdater.xml (original)
+++ trunk/kubuntu/adeptguide/adeptupdater/C/adeptupdater.xml Tue Sep 12
20:02:44 2006
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@
<sect1 id="introduction" status="draft">
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>
- &napp; and &uapp; are two applications that work hand
in hand to keep your system up to date. &napp; is an application that will
notify you when there are updates to packages installed and &uapp; will allow
you to update these applications. Both &napp; and &uapp; are frontends to the
<application>Apt</application> package management system for the K Desktop
Environment (KDE).
+ &napp; and &uapp; are two applications that work hand
in hand to keep your system up to date. &napp; is an application that will
notify you when there are updates to installed packages and &uapp; will allow
you to update these applications. Both &napp; and &uapp; are frontends to the
<application>Apt</application> package management system for the K Desktop
Environment (KDE).
</para>
<para>
- There is no need to launch &napp;, it sits in your
taskbar and will notify you when there are updates available. &uapp; will
launch when &napp; is opened from the taskbar or by running sudo adept-updater
from the command line or run line. Both applications require root access to
run correctly.
+ There is no need to launch &napp;. It sits in your
taskbar and will notify you when there are updates available. &uapp; will
launch when &napp; is opened from the taskbar or by running sudo adept-updater
from the command line or run line. Both applications require root access to
run correctly.
</para>
</sect1>
<sect1 id="getting-started" status="draft">
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
-
<emphasis>Hide Statusbar</emphasis>: Removes the statusbar from the bottom of
&uapp; which displays information about the packages installed on your system.
Including the number of packages that need to be updated.
+
<emphasis>Hide Statusbar</emphasis>: Removes the statusbar from the bottom of
&uapp; which displays information about the packages installed on your system,
including the number of packages that need to be updated.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
-
<emphasis>What's This?</emphasis>: Content specific help
+
<emphasis>What's This?</emphasis>: Context-specific help
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
<sect2 id="update-buttons" status="draft">
<title id="title-update-buttons">Update Buttons</title>
<para>
- At the bottom of &uapp; ther are two buttons
which can change based on what stage of updating your system &uapp; is at:
+ At the bottom of &uapp; there are two buttons
which can change based on what stage of updating your system &uapp; is at:
</para>
</sect2>
@@ -188,12 +188,12 @@
</mediaobject>
</screenshot>
<para>
- Upon notification updates are available, simply
double-click on &napp;, enter the root password, and &uapp; will open up.
+ Upon notification that updates are available, simply
double-click on &napp;, enter the root password, and &uapp; will open up.
</para>
<para>
- Once &uapp; is open simply click on "Fetch List of
Updates" and the updates will be downloaded. Once all of the apt-sources have
been checked, &uapp; will display a list of packages that need to be updated.
At this point, you can eitehr "Apply Updates" or "Forget Changes and Quit." If
you choose to apply the changes, &uapp; will download the update and install
them on your system.
+ Once &uapp; is open simply click on "Fetch List of
Updates", and the updates will be downloaded. Once all of the apt-sources have
been checked, &uapp; will display a list of packages that need to be updated.
At this point, you can eitehr "Apply Updates" or "Forget Changes and Quit." If
you choose to apply the changes, &uapp; will download the update and install
them on your system.
</para>
</sect1>
-</article>
\ No newline at end of file
+</article>
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