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Re: Comments on documentation: msg#00031

Subject: Re: Comments on documentation
Hi Ann,

We'll be updating the docs soon, and will address your comments.

- Penny


Ann Sunhachawee wrote:
> I'm new to the world of hypervisors, and was trying to set up Xen to 
> explore it. I dl'ed the bits based on build 66. I ran into some possible 
> issues which can probably be mostly cleared up via documentation. 
> Hopefully addressing those in documentation will allow others that are 
> new to Xen (and possibly Solaris) to easily be successful!
> 
>  From the docs page: http://opensolaris.org/os/community/xen/docs/
> 
> 
> "Creating the ISO Image from Downloaded Segments" 
> (http://opensolaris.org/os/community/xen/docs/download.html)
> - Could be a rookie mistake, but I think it doesn't hurt to mention 
> something to the effect of  "burn the ISO image to DVD using your 
> favorite app that can create a bootable disc". I had to puzzle a little 
> while when burning the iso to disc as data didn't work..
> 
> http://opensolaris.org/os/community/xen/docs/SetupDom0.htm
> - It's not clear to me how to accomplish "Adjust[ing] the default boot 
> item in /boot/grub/menu.lst to point to the Xen line". Could it be made 
> more explicit? From searching the web, it seems like changing the number 
> after "default" does the trick.
> -"You need to boot Xen first to get the correct devices created and 
> reboot." - does this mean that the user is expected to reboot after 
> booting Xen first? Clarifying the sentence could help out.. e.g. "You 
> need to boot Xen. first to get the correct devices created. Then reboot."
> - Unclear as to what the section starting with "When booting Solaris on 
> Xen" is there for, since on my menu.lst, it already had the correct 
> entry. Perhaps it should be made clear that this section is there to 
> address the exception case (e.g. wanting to boot 32 bit mode of 64 bit 
> system..)
> 
>  How to Install a Solaris DomU From an ISO Image 
> (http://opensolaris.org/os/community/xen/docs/install-solaris-domu-iso.htm)
> - The title of this page (in the browser's title bar) is "How to Set Up 
> an HVM DomU..."
> - What parameters are required and optional for the config file?
> - What are the other valid values for on_shutdown, on_reboot, on_crash?
> - The "type" table headers "Specifier" and "Meaning" point to internal 
> Sun URLs
> - Are there ways to point at the install dvd in the cd/dvd drive for 
> part of the "disk" tuple (versus a place on the drive)? I would imagine 
> that users would more likely have the install CD/DVDs available, and 
> could skip the step of copying it to disk. If so, including an example 
> of this syntax would be good.
> 
> http://opensolaris.org/os/community/xen/docs/HVMdomains.htm
> - I did some cursory searching on the Xen site, but didn't find what the 
> acronym HVM stood for. Spelling it out somewhere (Hardware Virtual 
> Machine) would be nice. (ah, i stumbled across the glossary and found 
> HVM at the very bottom of page 
> http://opensolaris.org/os/community/xen/docs/specs.html . HVM could link 
> to this definition)
> 
> Alas, I was able to set up dom0 successfully, but not domUs. (Hmm, just 
> noticed that my NIC e1x10 isn't listed as one that supports GLD as 
> mentioned in the Supported Configurations ) If I do get through the 
> whole process, i'll provide more feedback. Any comments on my experience 
> so far?
> 
> Thanks,
> Ann
> 
> 
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