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Re: Proposed text for 3.6.3 Supporting Navigation: msg#00022

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Subject: Re: Proposed text for 3.6.3 Supporting Navigation


Chris Lilley wrote to <mailto:www-tag@xxxxxx> on 10 August 2004 in "Re: Proposed text for 3.6.3 Supporting Navigation" (<mid:1408474571.20040810220756@xxxxxx>):

Dirk goes to http://mymap.example.org, locates the museum, and mails
the URI
http://mymap.example.org/geo?sessionID=765345;userID=Dirk to
Nadia. Dirk reads Nadia's email and is able to follow the link to the
map. Nadia reads Dirk's email, follows the link, and receives an
error
message 'No such session/user'. She has start again from
http://mymap.example.org and find the museum location once more.

EW> From the W3C Manual of Style [MANUAL]:

EW> First person pronouns ("I," "we") which are hard to translate should
EW> not be used in the text of examples. See the email message "Personal
EW> pronouns in specifications" [PRONOUNS]. Avoid "my" and "me" in examples
EW> (e.g., use "userResource" and not "myResource").

Okay, s/She/Nadia

I was unclear. The problem is the domain label "mymap". Could the label "travel" replace "mymap"?

--
Etan Wexler.





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