Re: Some corrections for english Release Notes 1.61

On Thursday 16 June 2005 09:28, Luca Brivio wrote:
> row 1138:
> -      the older stable Linux kernel series. You may wish to upgrade
> to a 2.6
> +      the older stable Linux kernel series, you may wish to upgrade
> to a 2.6
>
> row 1200:
> -          <p>As mentioned above, in may cases <prgn/mdadm/ can work
> without
> +          <p>As mentioned above, in many cases <prgn/mdadm/ can work
> without
>
> row 1332:
> -           <p>Since there is no &oldreleasename; of &debian; for the
> AMD64
> +           <p>Since there is no &oldreleasename; release of &debian;
> for the AMD64
>
> row 1217:
>
> -          (raidtools2) to <file>/etc/mdadm/mdadm.conf</file> (mdadm),
> please execute:
> +          (<package/raidtools2/) to <file>/etc/mdadm/mdadm.conf</file>
> (<package/mdadm/), please execute:
>
> and perhaps (in other cases an underscore is used) [
>
> row 1056:
> - # dpkg --remove <var>packagename</var>
> + # dpkg --remove <var>package_name</var>
>
> row 1088:
> - # dpkg -r --force-depends <var>packagename</var>
> + # dpkg -r --force-depends <var>package_name</var>

All applied (plus one extra "package_name" change).
Current English revision: 1.62.

Thanks Luca.

(Sorry Claus.)

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