Basic tutorial for eToys needs reviewers

Hi

I finished to write a chapter of my book on eToy but I'm expert in that 
so I'm looking for person
willing to read if what I wrote is correct.
Other person can learn how to make animations, steer airplanes and cars 
;)
I do not want to send the pdf in the mailing list so contact me 
privately.

Stef



Dr. Stéphane DUCASSE (ducasse@xxxxxxxxxxxx) 
http://www.iam.unibe.ch/~ducasse/
 "if you knew today was your last day on earth, what would you do
 different? ... especially if, by doing something different, today
 might not be your last day on earth" Calvin&Hobbes