Re: Korean Tale

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Bill Kelly
Connecticut USA

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Hi everyone,

I want to share with you a Korean tale that will help you learn English. 
If you see the tale, please give me your feedback. Please let me know 
what you think about the grammar, spelling and meaning of my writing.

Now I start the tale of "Heng Boo and Nol Boo." It's very famous in 
Korea and everyone there knows the tale.

[Note the difference between these two sentences:

1. I know about the tale.
2. I know the tale.

[Sentence 1 means that you have heard about the tale. You know it 
exists, but you are not familar with any of the details about it. 
Senetence 2 means that you are very familiar with the details of the tale.]

A long time ago, there were two brothers, Nol Boo and Heng Boo.
One day their father died, leaving his entire fortune to his first son, 
Nol Boo.

Nol Boo was the elder brother. His character was bad. He was selfish, 
stingy, and had no charity. Heng Boo was good. He had charity and a warm 
heart, but was very poor.

Both brothers were married. Heng Boo had 9 children and lived at his
brother's house because he had no house of his own.

Nol Boo thought his younger brother was lazy and stupid, and he blamed 
his brother for everything. He was always abusing him, and one day he 
exiled him from the house.

After he left Nol Boo's house, Heng Boo had many difficult
problems. He couldn't feed his wife and children

One day he went to his elder brother's house to ask for food, but Nol 
Boo rejected him and refused to help him. Heng boo left discouraged, 
with tears in his eyes.

The seasons changed, and spring was coming. Many swallows were flying 
through the sky, and one of them landed on Heng boo's small and rude 
cabin. After some time, the swallow gave birth to two baby swallows.

One day Heng Boo saw one of the baby swallows on the ground with a 
broken leg. Snakes had attacked the baby swallows and eaten one, but had 
not yet eaten the other. Heng Boo saved the remaining baby swallow and 
cured its wound.

[Note:

it's = it is
its = belonging to it; of it]

Continued in Part 2

Thank you for reading. Bye.

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hammok70 wrote:
> 
> 
> hi everyone.
> I want to talk about some korean tale for learning english. if you
> saw the tale, please give me your feedback. please let me know what
> you think about the grammar ,spelling and meaning of my writing. now
> I start the tale of 'Heng boo and Nol boo'. it's very famous in korea
> and everyone knows about that tale in korea.
> 
> long time ago, there were a brother in the country. they are Heng boo
> and Nol boo. Heng boo is elder brother. one day their father was dead
> inheriting all fortune to his first son Nol boo.
> Nol boo's character was bad, selfish, stingy and no charity but Heng
> boo's character was so good, had charity, warm heart but very poor.
> they are all married. Nol boo had 9 children and lived at his
> brother's house because he had not a house.
> Nol boo think his younger brother Heng boo as lazy man, no thinking
> man and he always blame his brother. Nol boo always abuse his brother
> Heng boo. in the final, Nol boo exile his brother at his house.
> after comeing out of Nol boo's house, Heng boo had very difficult
> problems. he can'st feed his wife and children. someday he went to
> his elder brother's house for help some food. but Nol boo reject to
> help him. Heng boo come back with tear and discourage.
> the season changed and spring is coming, many swallow fly the sky.
> some swallow made on Heng boo's small and rude cabin. time's going,
> the swallow had a birth of two baby swallow, one day, Heng boo saw
> one baby swallow on the earth had leg fracture. snack attacked the
> baby swallow and ate one baby swallow but the other couldn't eat yet.
> Heng boo saved the last one baby swallow and cured it's fracture.
> 
> continue at second part.
> thank you for reading. bye.


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