the korean tale ' Heng boo and Nol boo'

hi everyone.
I want to talk about some korean tale for learning english. if you 
saw the tale, please give me your feedback. please let me know what 
you think about the grammar ,spelling and meaning of my writing. now 
I start the tale of 'Heng boo and Nol boo'. it's very famous in korea 
and everyone knows about that tale in korea.

long time ago, there were a brother in the country. they are Heng boo 
and Nol boo. Heng boo is elder brother. one day their father was dead 
inheriting all fortune to his first son Nol boo. 
Nol boo's character was bad, selfish, stingy and no charity but Heng 
boo's character was so good, had charity, warm heart but very poor. 
they are all married. Nol boo had 9 children and lived at his 
brother's house because he had not a house.  
Nol boo think his younger brother Heng boo as lazy man, no thinking 
man and he always blame his brother. Nol boo always abuse his brother 
Heng boo. in the final, Nol boo exile his brother at his house.
after comeing out of Nol boo's house, Heng boo had very difficult 
problems. he can'st feed his wife and children. someday he went to 
his elder brother's house for help some food. but Nol boo reject to 
help him. Heng boo come back with tear and discourage.
the season changed and spring is coming,  many swallow fly the sky. 
some swallow made on Heng boo's small and rude cabin. time's going, 
the swallow had a birth of two baby swallow,  one day, Heng boo saw 
one baby swallow on the earth had leg fracture. snack attacked the 
baby swallow and ate one baby swallow but the other couldn't eat yet. 
Heng boo saved the last one baby swallow and cured it's  fracture. 

continue at second part.
thank you for reading. bye.







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