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I TRY TO MAKE SOME CORRECTIONS: msg#00031

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Subject: I TRY TO MAKE SOME CORRECTIONS



Gonzalo Felipe Baixauli <sivasalhort@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: Hi everybody:

I live in the north_east(YOU MUST PUT '_' BETWEEN NORTH AND EAST) of Argentina(
NOT ARGANTINIA CORRECT ONE ÝS ARGENTINA) and the weather here is being (WE
CANNOT USE A )little bit strange this winter. The weather changes very easily.
Sometimes it's hot, about 30- 35º C, but sudDenly(THERE ARE DOUBLE 'D ' ÝN
SUDDENLY) it changes.The minimun temperatures falls(YOU SHOULD SAY TEMPATURES
FALL OR TEMPATURE FALLS) from 18 to 0º C. It never rains. The last time it
rained was on March, almost six months ago. So the cows in the country are
dying. They have nothing to drink and nothing to eat. The only grass irt
remained was frozen in the beggining of the week.So I think the meat's price is
going to risE( NOT RISING)

Please correct my English.


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