Re: Sentance

Thalib--
   
  What you wrote are not really sentences, because none of them expresses a 
complete thought; they have no subject or fully functional verb.  They are 
phrases that seem to specify objectives.  Here is a suggested revision:
   
  These are objectives I need to achieve:
  1.       To shorten response time to each user complaint.
2.       To shorten the length of time required to resolve the user's     
problem.
3.       To prevent recurrence of the same problem.
   
  Bruce (Texas, USA)

Amnac C <amnac70@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
  Dear all,

I type 3 sentences like below.

1.       To shorten respond time to user complain.
2.      To shorten maintenance duration to user     
problem.
3.      To prevent recurrence of same problem. 

This is something I need to achieve. Could some check
it and correct.

                
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